Tag Design (WIP)

[unit_number_43]

Nowhere near completed, I haven't even figured out how i'm going to do content yet. but I thought I'd get an opinion on the feel and the color scheme.

[Bradley]

I like the red on beige, not a fan of the background pattern, though. Doesn't seem to fit in my eyes. Are you gunna Flash it?

[Falc0re]

very good!!! but the white pattern looks like my grandma´s bathroom wall. maybe you can find a better pattern. i would keep it plain.

[[PHXN] New001]

I agree with what everyone said, Just make teh BG like a crumpled pattern looking thing so it doesnt looks so blech

[unit_number_43]

No flash. This is going to, most likely, become a wordpress theme.

The background was a last minute change before saving the file. I was hoping to make it appear older, like 1930's but I guess I missed my mark.

The inspiration was actually from a pack of Kamel Red cigarettes



A very delightful design. Probably one of the best package designs i've ever seen.


******UPDATED WITH NEW (ACTUALLY OLD) BACKGROUND********

[[PHXN] New001]

ALOT BETTER!
Looks alot different and that BG is especialy good to help the flow of the piece

[Bradley]

The background needs more.. grunge.... almost. I can't put my finger on it exactly...I can see where you could be going with it.. as soon as I saw the stripes related to your 1930's feel, I instantly thought Zoot Suit.... But it's too neat compared the the layout itself.

[Papa]

WOW man, that looks awesome. Really cool idea and great job. The bg could be a tad more grungy, but its really good. nice job.

[Henry]

incredible stuff as usual.
only thing is the button text is a little bit hard to read.

[Samuel]

Hum. I'm not liking the font. It's not the "lined spray" part, just the all caps and half rounded, half boxy.

Seems a bit to mix matched. Just seems the whole design is a bit limited, no growing room.

Just my thoughts. =)