self portraits

[stanx]

nothing extra, just made this pic for myspace, and i kinda like it.

[Papa]

YOUR KILLING YOURSELF! DONT SMOKE MAN!

I like the first picture...second picture..meh.

[MartinBabies]

Second one is awesome (sorry papa :P), good composition and beautifully captured smoke. The first one is cool, but the head in the center kills it. Bad angle and bad composition. But the second one is great! Maybe a little more contrasts on that one?

[stanx]

yea i knew the composition is shitty on the first one, but i was just lasy to use rule of thirds in any way :/

glad you like the second one, rabie gonna try to add a little more contrast to it.

ty for the comments

[Neiromaru]

try coloring the smoke like in all those anti-marijuanna movies from the 70s :-)

[Henry]

Second one is awesome (sorry papa :P), good composition and beautifully captured smoke. The first one is cool, but the head in the center kills it. Bad angle and bad composition. But the second one is great! Maybe a little more contrasts on that one?

my thoughts.