Quote Originally Posted by Blazer View Post
It's good man, nice flow and lighting.

Text is uber small.
Text doesent need to be big

Quote Originally Posted by jsoosiah View Post
looks a bit bright. for text, don't blindly use default fonts like the other advice said - use what fits. your font isn't really the problem (though it could be better). more positioning, color, opacity ect. that needs work.
Agree here.

The only thing is to get the blur ligten thing a bit mor away from her.