[H] K Town

[Herc.]

Harsh critic welcome
rates apreciated

[Alice Suttle]

It's really hard to tell what's going on. I see a sprite there, but I have no idea what he's doing. I think everything is a little too merged together and the lack of variation in colour makes it difficult to understand what the sig is all about.

I see some nice effects within the piece and I'm sure with the right lighting and colour, it could look really ace.

[tunafish69]

Damnit alice, you said everything I was going to say but 20 minutes earlier

[Herc.]

thanks for the comment

[f y a s [k] o]

Gotta agree with Alice and Tuna. It's hard to see what the dealio is.