There's criticism and then there's just being mean. Take a guess which direction you're going in. Stop being a jerk because someone doesn't have as much "talent" as you. I don't like your art, but I don't come out and say it's horrible.
Anyways, I guess to bring the topic back to what Chronos did - It looks good. Keep working on your line art skill and adding in more shadows and highlights to your digital painting. It's a lot better than anything I could accomplish right now.