Well.

Focus your attention on focusing attention... That is a terrible terrible pun, and I should be banned for it.

There is no structure to the layout, it's just a sea of text. It took me a really long time to figure out that you've got three separate paragraphs there. Imagine how long it would take to find something I needed to read (too long). So, break up the layout with borders, spacing, graphics; and decide how you want things to flow. Without looking back the website, can you name the focal point and what that then directs your eye too? Well it's just barely the title (just barely because it almost blends in with the background colors) and it's so long that it just shoots your eye right off the page. You need something to bring you back to the next line and the body content.

Sorry for railing you, ignore it if you want.