I kinda like it i think you should bring the focal out more and reduce the black to the bottom right because thats the first thing that drew my eye rather than the focal. but dont get me wrong i do like it just think theres room to improve. Im all for the simple stuff ^_^. Cant really see much difference between the two really one just a tad lighter than the other? or have i drank too many beers tonight?. (and for the record i know ive drank too many beers)
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