The Call

[Studhorse]

Yea, I know...2 focals and lighting is off, but other than that, does it work?

[Psypher]

Other than what you mentioned, it almost does.
Is the guy sitting on a bed? Is the female really that short?

I would sharpen the guy more, just so you won't have so much conflicting focal points.

Other than that, good job!

[Studhorse]

yea, he's sitting on a bed and you're right, he does need some sharpening.
Well, she's behind the bed and against the wall, so she should be shorter, but I agree with you in that she doesn't look quite in place.
Good points though