im pretty much new but pls rate =P

[Firescorpio]

umm yeah well im new at the forums and well i wanted to give it a shot to see what you guys think and well thanks

[Fur]

Not to bad for being new
1.Turn the oppcity down on them they are a little to bright and you cant really see anything else
2.Need to work on text a little more by blending it in, but text is also pretty hard to get perfect, try and make the text smaller to it takes away from the focal point witch is the render
3.Add a boarder to the sigs makes them look a lot better
4.Blend the renders more to instead of just putting them on there they dont look as good
5.Try and not do to many effects over the renders to it also takes away from the focal point

there are a few more things and im not trying to be mean just trying to help, look at some tuts around here, welcome to the void btw and I hope to see some of your works soon!

PS rateing 6/10 for being new

[tunafish69]

WAY too bright!

[Firescorpio]

thanks and i take no offense at all ill try to work on what you said and ill check on the tuts on the page thnks allot though anything i can do to get better is well recieved =P

[Fur]

lol thats the spirit and you can PM me or anyone if you need any help, ill try and help as much as i can

[Sp!t]

overlighted

[Immortal.]

nice for a beginner..i see u like that dreamy effect