Thanks for the comments guys. Seriously. I'm trying really hard to steer away from using tuts and stuff. Cuz I never experiment with them. that's a huge downfall of mine. But I appreciate how you guys were willing to take time to post criticism. This is like the most replies I've ever gotta from a piece that I've done from any of the message boards that I go to... (or used to for that matter)

Thanks again...