1st one is perdy awesome just the flash of light next to guys left arm dosent bode with me well and the text is okay but the middle e looks like a o (lol im speeling out the vowels ) and dark (intentional??). Just a tad to bright for me. Though on a good note it looks preety damn good. This one has some potential

2nd I dont really like as much (not because it purple...)...I hatorz the text i cant seem to spell out yur name. Also the render may be to transparent/covered for my taste..

1st: 7.7(as sig now)
2nd:7.5(as sig is now)

...I feel like imma get flamed because im not anywhere near your skills green....