Simple thing

[NeoNizer]

Worthless piece: like the background, text was effortless...

[imported_Jack]

O_O holy dam lol

ok, ill help you out a bit first of all, get rid of ALL of that typo. Dont use bevelled text (ever) thats transparent (even worse). Its gross lol. Dont take what I'm saying here the wrong way, just giving you advice. I know you said text was effortless, but the whole piece is effortless if you work hard on one part and quarter ass it on another part. Use a lot less text (couple words and a name at MOST) and dont make it different sizes. The background.... im not a big fan of. Its way too flat and it has no focal point. Its just some not-too-good grunge work with some purple brushing on top of it (it looks that way at least). Ive said this to a lot of people so far on these forums, and in my opinion, its good advice. Develop your own style and give your stuff more of a focus. Get an idea or concept for something, and try to execute it. If it was a worthless piece, you probably shouldnt have posted it hehe. Work on something of worth (in your opinion) post it and we'll see how things go from there. Oh and for future reference, if its a sig, make it much smaller. As of now, its HUGE. A reasonable sig size (even though most people here would disagree) is about 400-450 wide by 80-100 tall.

[silenced]

Why the **** are you showing this to us, you are just putting yourself down, if you think its worthless-save our time and don't post it.

2. Its not bad if you are a noob, but ya there is a LOT of clutter. and its too big