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Thread: my stuff -.-"

  1. #1
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    I came here to improve ... so yea not that good but hoping to become much better!







    I didn't bother posting everything because everything else is even worse thant his

    And this is just today after reading one of the tuts (you rule Heavystarch!)



    I think I sort of improved with jus that already :huh:

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    they are all pretty good, but simple

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    Don't be so hard on yourself
    I'll keep it short this time lol. Maybe Ill come back later and post a more detailed comment when I'm not so busy. They all have some unattractive/random backgrounds (the 4th one is a little better than the others though). With that, the characters you have on there dont fit in at all. Theres no depth that way. It just looks like theyre pieces of paper sitting on that background. You need a way to make the two (background and foreground) flow together better. Some of your fonts (like Straw Hat) you should never ever use lol they wouldnt work well with anything. In the 3rd and 4th one, that little bar across the sig that has your name on it, you should avoid making that bar. I really like that simple font you have in those though it looks like AvanteGuard. Keep on working, youll improve.

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    LMAO, I swear between Metal's brushes and slims tut you two are killing a generation of taggers. =p j/k *Thats like the 3rd or 4th I've seen someone use that tut in the last week or so*


    Anyways they could use some work. Most of them are missing depth. The image placement needs a bit of work as well.

    Plus yeah the Opacity strip is a pretty bad thing to use most of the time. You don't find a sig that you can really put that in very often, if ever, and still have it look good.

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