its better, but there are still shading tweaks to be done to make it more realistic. For example: the umbrella has curves between the spokes. You need shadows (subtle shadows) on the right side of the area between spokes. You also might want to zoom in (I do most of my work at like 1200% and zoom out to see how it looks hehe) and do small shadows on her face her clothes and all of that stuff. As for the face, smudge (do it carefully, dont make it obvious that your smudging) the parts of the water fall next to the face into the face so it looks like the water is forming the face.