It seems kinda weird how it fades out on the sides. I dont like how the text is partly transparent. Its nice how the typography is simple, but I just dont like its coloring. The particle brushing and the lines in the background are a bit annoying. I think that we should be able to see his left hand. It seems strange how it gets so bright that we cant see it. If youre going to do that, do that on either side of his hand, not over his hand. The big, basic brushing is ok, a little simple for my tastes though (being that the rest of it isnt all that simple). I also think you should get rid of the grid. Not only is it out of place, but its unoriginal. Its been used way too many times.