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[~FireTap]

http://www.deviantart.com/view/21477914/

Tell me what you think of this?
It's all brushing, and the brushes I used were my Grunge Brushes (set 4).

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[Lumix]

Work on the colours and depth..

[Sobek]

Originally posted by Lumix@Aug 8 2005, 05:24 PM
Work on the colours and depth..

[snapback]66581[/snapback]

I agree, has no depth and you need to use better colours. But i like the way you have done the lighting on the sun.

[imported_Jakska]

First off, it's tiny. It's wayyy too small. Secondly, the colours really clash, they don't work together whatsoever... Have you ever seen brown and blue before? This is why, they just don't work well.

[-RockStaR]

Work on the colours and depth..

agree, and PLUs it's plain.

[imported_Jack]

Originally posted by Jakska@Aug 8 2005, 05:47 AM
First off, it's tiny. It's wayyy too small. Secondly, the colours really clash, they don't work together whatsoever... Have you ever seen brown and blue before?

[snapback]66614[/snapback]

It is too tiny, I agree. I don't think the colors clash too badly though. Brown is a neutral color. You'd get it by mixing complimentary colors. We all know that. Because its neutral, it works with pretty much everything. Of course, this all depends on hues. The brown in this has a little too much red in it. It needs some more blue and a tiny bit more green. It looks like its a mountain with the sky and clouds above it (I'm guessing that was the idea) but depicted in an abstract way. I don't think the text fits. I think you should make a border (a thicker one) and then put the text on the bottom of the border. Also, lose the lense flare. You have grungy brushes with a smooth lense flare, they dont mix. Plus, you don't want to use a lense flare anyway. They're cheap and they typically don't go over well with most people. You should have expanded on the idea of "the end". Next time, work larger and a little more complex