IMO this is perfect. Brushing is great... and I love the lighting effects... specially the way it fits with the renders lighting already.. and how it fades out to black. Text is good too cuzz its nice and simple like the sig, i mean mabey it could use a lil work but nothin drastic. Also like the way the text fades out into black also. I like these kinda sigs... i say keep it up with em mang... lol. GJ