The left side, infront of this face is really nice, its everything else I don't really care for.

First the typo really needs work. The climb-x typo stands out way to much and the silent text is way to centered, and doesn't fit. Center the "render" or move it more to the right abit more and add that light effect from the light side to more of the tag. Then redo the typo in general and it would look alot better. Just keep working with it.