Im gonna have to agree w/ the rest. Your text needs work, try to stay away from using bevel and emboss. Also try simpler fonts. Its a bit too monotone, try using more colors..like the color of the render. Dont be so hard on yourself either, keep a positive attitude and read some tutorials here at cx or anywhere and you'll get better. Id recommend this tut for you Krazys tut..clicky! If you watch that Im almost positive youll learn some things.