Sunshine

[.element]

wow this was hard to make..

http://www.deviantart.com/view/22391092/

please comment or fav

[van]

ok..let's start.
1. The hat looks fine to me, but her eye's aren't they way they should be.
2. There are shadows on the body, but not on the clothes. Why is that?
3. Strange shadows on the hand too

So these are my comments to your work Good luck

[C K]

I don't really care for the skin color it seems off, and you need to work on your detail and flow abit. some of the shapes just seem randomly put on there and don't flow with the rest of the piece. Also try to redo the hand, I always have a hard time with them myself but that finger is kind of of freakish. =p.

Over all is not bad though I guess. Like I said just work on your detail A bit, just because its a vector doesn't mean it can't have depth you know? =)

[.element]

Originally posted by van@Aug 31 2005, 05:09 PM
ok..let's start.
1. The hat looks fine to me, but her eye's aren't they way they should be.
2. There are shadows on the body, but not on the clothes. Why is that?
3. Strange shadows on the hand too

So these are my comments to your work Good luck

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bcause the shirt was originally black..

[Lumix]

The eyes certainly look scary.. Give it more depth.. Especially on the clothes.. Looks really flat.. The hand position is akward.. Work on it more and what is that yellow blob on her nose? :P

[.element]

Originally posted by Lumix@Aug 31 2005, 05:58 PM
The eyes certainly look scary.. Give it more depth.. Especially on the clothes.. Looks really flat.. The hand position is akward.. Work on it more and what is that yellow blob on her nose? :P

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piercing

[xTitaniC]

bha broken link bro

[phatso]

Originally posted by xTitaniC@Sep 1 2005, 07:51 AM
bha broken link bro

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same here

[Sobek]

Originally posted by interstella hitman@Sep 4 2005, 04:56 PM
same here

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That was kinda pointless....


I think he must of taken it from his dA gallery, because it isn't in there, i just checked, and can't find anything that matches the comments or the title here....