autumn's promise

[affekt.]

http://www.deviantart.com/view/23072035/

comments on da are appreciated

[silenced]

Saw this one, great job man, really looks great. The colors flow perfectly. Faved at dA.

[affekt.]

i appreciate it alot man

[Metal]

Has no focal point and pretty flat. I like the text alot, though.

[imported_Jakska]

I think it looks ok, but I've kinda got to agree with Metal on this. It's not that flat though, just lack of focal point.

[static06]

love the bottom left brushing...

but agree with Metal, no focal point

[Wurmy]

( Vocal Point, not Focal Point :P )
Don't get the title..
No real Vocal point, like they said, normally I'm attracted to one spot, so I looked in the middle and saw it was dark, as if it was far away, right side seems to be travelling.. So I'm left with the bottom-left wall, not bad though..
~8.12/10

[ZeekUnreloaded]

Focal point....an area that draws focus. Not vocal. Vocal pertains to voice.

I don't know much about C4D so I won't comment on your techinique. Looks good though, I like the colors and the shapes work well together.