Its not bad at al for a first sig, the background isnt bad at al. I raelly dislike the font color you used, but it really does stand out. In most cases I suggest using a similar color, either darker or lighter to contrast.

I suggest trying to beld something in that you enjoy, add some more style to it. Also, the border is a bit thick in my opinion. First sig; 7/10, Generally; 4/10