Originally posted by C.K@Oct 15 2005, 02:01 PM
It doesn't really have a flow, or a very good one atleast. Colors are okay, but they are just random spots everywhere so try to even out your brushing and color use. Though I haven't seen that stock used before I think it could be used a bit better in this one.

Work on your blending. Also don't just brush a bg and add a render/stock whatever you want to call it. When using a image you want it to be the focal point of the piece so make sure the bg works with it atleast and make sure when you finish the sig that they look like one piece. Not just 2 things put together. Try to make it where if someone was to look at it they couldn't tell that you just brushes a background and added a stock but make them almost belive that you just cut it down from a larger image and that the 2 pieces of the work were one.

Also the scan lines going up and down the side don't look very good. Why are they there? What do they add to my sig? These are the things you need to ask yourself when making something be it a tag, a painting, etc. So take them out.

Also the typo looks out of place(I myself have this problem) so work on it more and just get rid of the swish thing by it.

If I sound like I'm being a dick, I'm not. Trust me. Just keep working with it and keep in mind the things I said.
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^ There we go, take what C.K says and learn more man