well hold on, double posting won't get you comments, just wait, people will eventually, don't be impatient otherwise it'll piss people off even more, at least it does me.

m a k e y o u r o w n r e n d e r s. I'd give you way more comments if you made them yourself; anyone can brush a render, and make it looks good, it's creating them, then working from there that's harder.

About the piece itself: To me, what makes it is the render, and the material used on it, your brushing is nothing special, it's just your stereotypical tad blurry at points, with a light source at the "beginning" of the render. So I don't like it.