Awakening

[Wiseson]

http://www.deviantart.com/view/24336225/

Any CnC and rate appreciated

[BaNgRnLeEvR]

awsomeness... gj!

[Wiseson]

thx

[S-Gen.]

where to begin..

1) way too much contrast.. not appealing
2) the render is hard to see with the contrast and "brushing" and therefore loses depth
3) incorrect lighting
4) the colors aren't appealing
5) the background is over brushed, the grunge look doesn't go well with an abstract render
6) there isn't any "airbrushing" but rather it is just overlay grunge brushing

hope that helps.