Thread: ugh

**Buchanan** · 12-08-2005, 05:19 AM

C&C please.

**Wiseson** · 12-08-2005, 09:20 AM

imo v2 is very nice but could alittle more sharpness. Overall good job.

**Buchanan** · 12-08-2005, 10:15 AM

Is that better?

**aka_SFX5** · 12-08-2005, 12:10 PM

flow is good but it needs more and i think the white part on the left should be on the right b/c the lighting on the face is on the right side

**Buchanan** · 12-08-2005, 12:47 PM

Yeah, I didn't realise that untill after I done it all :/

**imported_Hombre** · 12-08-2005, 05:59 PM

I think it looks real nice, except I don't like the render at all.

Good job though, and I like the text.

**sythe** · 12-09-2005, 06:28 AM

it is pretty nice but sfx is right

**Chucks** · 12-09-2005, 06:31 AM

Deff improved. Apart from the lighting, I think you should also work on the BG a bit more, it's quite boring atm. Nice flow though.

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