FOXTROTUNIFORMCHARLYKILO

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[myst]

Take out the scanlines, and update it. And make the left side darker.

[S-Gen.]

hard to see anything, and yea take out those scan lines

[C K]

=/ To be honest..I'm not really liking this one at all man. Though yeah the scan lines doesn't really fit this sig the lighting is what bugs me I think and the shards of white everywhere, they just don't belong IMO. As Myst said maybe make one side darker or maybe even both and find a better way to add a light source.

really I don't know. =/

[Spid3r]

pattern is annoying, and ^^^^^^ make the left darker.....

[Kyoushima]

Originally posted by m y s t@Dec 12 2005, 02:49 PM
Take out the scanlines, and update it. And make the left side darker.

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Agrees, other then that, GJ

[.element]

SIR YES SIR!



updated..

[myst]

looks uglier =(

take the v1 and take off scanlines and make left darker.

[Spid3r]

oversharpened and messy; clean it up.....

and too much overlay ?

[Spluff]

I'm going to comment on the first one, because the second is worse, imo.

It's too crowded, and theres no real feeling of.. realism, I guess. Theres a bunch of lighting over the right, but no darkness. It's very crowded, how about some negative space?

IMO, something like this (But better )