First nice smudging attempt

[YellowSubmarine]

C&C

[Slim]

its alright. the render seems a bit blurry, and that bright red spot in the top left seems out of place. it could use some more work, but its still a nice sig overall. good work man

[Seg3ta]

I dont really see smudging in this one. The render itself is bad quality, and degrades the nice colours of the background I feel. Text?

Id simply say change the render. It will look much better.

[YellowSubmarine]

Ok i'll do that. Any ideas for the text?

[sythe]

agree with the others need to change render, dont see much smudging, bgisnt great and the red is out of place