Fractal with Alyssa Milano? No. Doesn't flow. BG doesn't go with the stock, and text needs major improvement. Also the blending needs improvement, i don't like how you can see the bg through her face.

By the way, it's nice to see you are posting your work, and not complaining that you suck. The only way you can get better is by posting your work and getting CnC to help you.