First Sig

[Devil86HH]

Hy guys im new hear and this is my first Sig.
What do you Think about it?

[Chucks]

Not too bad for a first signature.
Take the stroke off the render and work on the text, it's too big and doesn't flow with the rest of the signature.
Something else that bothers me is that the render's head is quite pushed down, you don't necessarily have to fit the whole gun in (That's what I think, you don't really have to take any note of that :P).
I think you should lower the opacity of that circular shape behind the render as it's standing out a bit too much at the moment.

But very nice signature as a first, just keep trying. Read more tutorials and I'm sure you'll be on track soon

[Mr.Black]

user posted image

[Devil86HH]

i can see the image!

[sythe]

chucks has got most stuff covered, just take the stroke around the render away and the scanlines away, and i think make the sig shorter so that your text doesn't have to be as big and you don't have too much empty space

[Eternal]

Not bad at all for a first.

Take the stroke off the render, and make the text smaller and a different colour, the way it is now, it attracts too much attention.