Evolution

[Grady]

I think it's decent


What do you think?



Edit:
V2

[Lumix]

Hi there :P
Fill up the dark spots.. Include some negative space near the sides... And a more obvious focal point at where you want it..

More colours too

[Grady]

Another one here for critique.

The name seemed more fitting in this rather than the first one :P



And good to see you Lumix