lol I really don't know if it's like the new thing to say "No C4D", because I see a lot of people saying it, and it's usually kind of obvious...

It's pretty good... I don't know... Desaturate the eyes.
Don't like this type of text. If you're gonna try and make it look like it's written on it, do it right and make it look real, take a few minutes to do it, it'll be worth it.

Keep up.