Originally posted by Lumix@Feb 18 2006, 12:39 AM


those parts need revising.. try achieveing a smooth overall flow.. the brushing is kinda obvious and disturbs the flow.. render needs to stand out more.. sharpen once?

focal point needs to be stronger.. fade the sides a bit?

don't worry about the text.. work on those 1st
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agreed with him