Rule #1. Anime does, and will always suck. Learn it child. The vectors are decent, too bad it goes to anime. Try something original, like, your classroom at school, or even your desk area. Not some guy about to take a cumshot.

The abstract. I hate them, except for the coloring-which is stunning. As my colleague jackables has said, lose the explosion and don't be a whore, do something original. The color is the best part, and I'd love to see more like it.