For one i think it needs colour, the test is not that good and the stroke kinda kills it and the text position is bad, to add colour I think u should use the colour in the ja rule pic, just duplicate the pic a couple times and move it around so that they fill the bg then merge all the copies and give them a blur (gaussian or radial) then set that layer to something like hue, that way u get a natual colour that blends with the ja rule pic.
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