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[Xobile]

trying this new style. i dont know if i made it up or its been around for a while, but the sig looks ok and it needs sumthing else. opinions and suggestions would be great:

[Jefster]

I don't really like the colours and I think it lacks depth.

I hope you don't mind but I downloaded the image and tried inverting it and then applying an eyecandy anti-matter filter and stuff.. I got some nice results. I won't post my results unless you want me to, though.

You might want to mess around with that sort of thing yourself.

[Xobile]

i wont mind if u post your results. it could give me some ideas.

[Jefster]

This is the straight colour inversion:




Here are a couple I got with the anti-matter filter:





I particularly liked the way that last one came out.

I hope they give you some ideas.

[Elektrik]

Needs a focal point, coloring, and more smoothness.

Scrap it IMO

[imported_Jack]

Needs a focal point, coloring, and more smoothness.[/b]

Technically, it doesn't need any of those things. It's not a bad thing for the eyes to wander

It's different, though I have seen that thing you've done with the gray lines quite a few times. I think you should make one or two of the pink spots (or maybe the shape behind the type) more intense so that it really pops. The rest you should leave as is, good stuff.