** Warning Warning Will Robinson, Retina's Burnt Out **

The only negative i think is the brightness. Otherwise i think its incredible. The text is perfect and i love the effect you have done with it. I love how you have done the blending and looks like you have used the dodge tool or some such, but it looks incredible. The paths of light are kick ass.

So other than the brightness (which could just be my tired old eyes) i think its kick ass mate.