O M G BeaSt made a LP

[BeaSt]

haha that rhymed

[Light]

oversharpened/contrasted, erase some of the c4d especially in the middle.
I would have liked it much more without all that sharpness, it hurts my eyes.
Keep practising =)

[gomezfx]

oversharpened like light said.

[Smiling Demon]

yar too sharp m8, also like light said bout the c4d in the centre it detracts from your focal. but keep at it, your heading in the right direction.

[Smiler Small]

thats rihanna aint it?....

but yeh toooo sharp but i likes it part from that

[csimao]

i think you should erase the c4d on the right, cause it stand in front of rihanna
and as other said...its a bit too sharpened :/
all the rest looks good