Loving the lighting, very atmospheric. Brings it to life even though the body is motionless.

Gotta say I prefer the first one, the second is kinda...I don't know, odd. It's like the eye is out of proportion with the image.

Very emotive expression, though I'd say the body could use a bit more of a dynamic posture. However, even though that would make the picture overall more emotive, it would probably take focus off the actual point, the scream of the face.