Kind of a small focal point render it seems, and there is alot going on in the bg; try to not do use so man line tools and lower the opacity on them so they arn't standing out so much.
Also add a gaussian blur to the bg so the focal point stands out a bit more, and try adding some clipping masks where the blue spots are to give it a little more effect and so they dont stand out so much, and lower the opacity on them.
As for the text normally try to stick with a default font most times if you can't find a good font that goes with the render, and use colors from the render or sig itself.
Overall pretty decent, never seen a bomberman sig; so nice to see something new