Quote Originally Posted by Neku View Post
Hmph... It's good, I guess.
Next time try to give him some CNC that will actually give him some feedback on what is good. Saying it's good i guess isn't gonna help him get better.

IMO V2 is better, but it seems like there is a ton of lines. ALmost too many. they distract me a lot away from the sprite. I would try to tone them down. The Ball coment effect thing by his hands looks cool i like that.

Overall i think it needs more effects, also a Topaz filter might really help this out. Migth wanna try it.
Good text though.