I think it's your best yet. If you hadn't said that the text goes with the game I wouldn't like it. but if it works then use it. it'd be pointles snot too.

IMO it needs more effects and more depth. But the blending and lighting is good. TBH i don't think it's all that monotone. I agree it's not colorful, but that doesn't mean it's mono.
Overall not bad, current it for sure.