Flow wise it's kind of cool. I like the smudging. The BG seems really empty though i must agree with immortal.

You could try adding in a c4d or so and then some clipping masks? Also iIf you do a Filter>distort>displacement layer and then mask out the majority of it..it can save a ton of sigs.

text is okay..Not rly feeling it..kinda. I guess it's just not your usual par.

Are you tyrin out a different style? Kind of seems like you have been lately. Cool stuff though I'd like to see a new style from you. Keep on working on it!