Abstract Oddities

[WarZone]

lemme know wat you think

[Garis]

DIFFERENT!
nice ;]
but both texts really need work.

[Immortal.]

nice to see something different for a change.
looks nice.
u could try experiemnting with diff texts, otherwise its a good piece.

[Studhorse]

Pretty funky and very different, which is nice.
I think the Abstract Oddities text is fine, but the other text can probably be dropped.
I don't think you need it there.