dude, change the border, not to be rude, but those brown random lines in the shape of a border look aweful (i think). your render looks pretty cool, but it is not blended very well, but i assume thats the effect your were after. your clear border under the brown stuff looks great, build off of it for a border. im not big on the quote nor the font used, but i dont know what you could do about that. over all, not too bad, 6/10.

dont mean to be rude in any way, but i think you could do better.