War on the streets

[Lewk]

Heres a New LP I made, ive also made a signature which ill upload later on..
V1

V2


CnC ?

[zole]

i like it but i feel its not finished :S

Edit: would be better if you actually had a street behind him

[ratchetnclank]

Need lighting lewky

[Lewk]

Thanks! Ill do so now. And as for zole. just like a stock and lower the opacity yes ?

[Nilsson.]

You should make the building behind him clearer, and perhaps use a street light as light source.. i think that would really fit into the atmosphere

[zole]

Yeah do that and see wat it looks like

Edit: didnt see V2 it looks better but maybe change it so we could see it abit more :S

[crozer]

looks nice. im a HUGE fan of gasmasks.
as someone already said, i'd really advise you brush like a grundge/old city behind. a street corner.. got me?

otherwise, looks good. try putin some lighting maybe

[†john316†™]

hmm i hope i'm wrong when i say this
but doesn't look like you did a thing except smudge the big some

i have the exact stock in my picture vault and i know what it looked like before
and as far as my eye can see all you did was alil smudge and text
and apply a little bit of another picture in fade form to the bg

i say if your calling that your finished product then, i don't like it
and it needs more

but if this is merely a WIP i say it looks good for as far as you have taken it
but its not done yet so keep at it

^_^