I guess i'm gonna be the debby downer here. I just don't like it that much. That font, GAR! haha i see it everywhere, it's been whored to the point of no return.

The c4d's it's nic ebut there too much there, you gotta erase the parts that dont look good.
And the red border just doesn't work. Your getting better but i think you are forgetting the rules you learned before.