Sry to be the negative nancy, but as sweet as people may think that popout thing is, it's really separating the sig and it just is killing the flow of the sig.

The text is better, no doubt about it. BG is a bit busy, i think you should try to minimalize it a bit more. make it a bit more aimed towards flow and less..everywhere.

Great use of c4d's though and I'm glad you are using clipping masked splatter brushes, seems like you really picked up some good techniques from those tuts. Major props.

Not bad but the square is killin it for me.