I agree this isn't yourbest. it's too bright.
A rthing to remember is when sigs are really bright like this, the first thing peoples eyes with go to is the darkestpart of the sig. Vicey versey with dark sigs as well.
So that said the first thing i went to was that dark line on his collar on the left side of him.

Not bad though I do like the BG and you always nail the text.