hmmm ...bh i also tried the tut esterday becuase i get bored of and i saw a lot of good outcomes ...i tried it but i am not a big fan of c4d and i took the wrong render for it so after 1 hour i deleted it because it was horrible respect to te guys that made some nice sigs with that tut ...Thumbs up to garis !

now to zole: ur black parts are way too big ...its makeing a sig very mysteriously but imo it doesnt match with the render...and its blurry like the peep above said ..
u made the best u could stille 100x better than mine

keep it up :P